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Post the first line of your story/book
Others rate/critique or say if they would want to read the rest based on that line.
Mine's shit but I'll start to get the ball rolling
>He gazed out his window at the glowing blue orb; This was his favorite time to see it, when the sun was directly behind, making the entire sphere luminous; And though he knew he would never return, (which was for the best) the view never lost its appeal.